Dreaming of a story

Dance is the medium through which I envision this story would be told. In up to ninety minutes and over eight sections the acclaimed dance company Bangarra would captivate audiences with their cultural knowledge, choreographic skills and unique, deeply connecting dance expressions. Storytelling would emerge from the voices of survivors of intergenerational child removals. One of these is a woman has ancestors who were removed from family, a daughter who was secretly stolen at birth, and a grandson taken as a baby and still being cruelly and unjustly withheld ten years later. Another is a woman who passed before her granddaughters were reunited with their loving father.

The style would be mythical, organic Dreamtime meets concrete jungle and bureaucracy. The tone of this complicated and conflictual relationship would be expressed visually with flowing, textured images of nature contrasting with harsh angular shapes and uniform colours. The aural landscape would convey these feelings by using sounds such as wind through trees, clap sticks, waves crashing on a shore and voices speaking and singing in lingo (Original language) interacting with modern industrial and clinical sounds. Perhaps a dreamlike aural collage technique could be used with modern bureaucratic voices stating the genocidal beliefs and rationalisations in a concrete box contrasting with whispers and gentle conversations around a campfire or on a windswept beach.

The eight stages of this story would be 1. The time before colonisation, 2. The shattering of that way of life, murder and desecration of the land by invasion, 3. The growth of the invader peoples and structures over time and country, 4. The changing weapons used to conquer (and to fight back), 5. The voice of The Mother gaining strength, 6. The exposure and seizure of the criminals, 7. Establishment of justice and 8. The new dawn- enjoyment of the rebirth of love and wisdom.

Novel Production Process

Flow chart adapted from ACS distance education website.

The Launch Meeting

  1. Author submits complete manuscript.

  2. Manuscript is accepted for publication.

  3. Editor checks that the text and references are complete, logs incoming permissions releases, and contacts the author with questions.

  4. A ‘cast-off’ is also performed whereby a chapter-by-chapter tally of the manuscript estimates the length and complexity of each of the components (eg. text, lists, figures, tables, photos, references) that make up the book’s interior.

  5. Launch meeting: All who will be involved in editing, producing, and marketing the book meet to discuss the manuscript, set a schedule for its production, and make formatting and pricing decisions. This meeting gives members of each department the opportunity to learn about the book, ask questions, and outline how production and marketing efforts will proceed.

  6. Acquisitions Editor formally passes the manuscript to a Book Production Editor who works closely with the author during the next several months.

  7. Book Production Editor oversees the book’s copy editing and production and keeping Author apprised of deadlines to ensure adherence to the projected publication date.

    Copy Editing

  8. Book Production Editor thoroughly reviews the hard copy. The hard copy and the digital copy must match.

  9. Book Production Editor edits the manuscript online for spelling, punctuation, grammar, clarity, consistency, etc and collaborates with the Author as questions arise.

  10. After the Book Production Editor has finished copy editing, he or she sends the Author a hard copy of the manuscript for them to closely review. (Additions will be in boldface, and deletions struck through.)

  11. Author must carefully respond to all queries and suggestions. (Because making substantial changes to the text after typesetting is costly, authors and editors should take this opportunity to make all necessary changes.)

    Co-authored Volumes

  12. If more than one Author wishes to review the copy edited manuscript, they must coordinate their changes and responses to queries so that all are marked in ink and only one hard copy is returned.

    Edited Volumes

  13. Each Lead Chapter Author receives a hard copy of his or her chapter to review; occasionally the Lead Volume Editor simultaneously reviews the chapters.

  14. Chapter Authors and Editors should coordinate their changes and answers to queries so that they appear together in ink on one hard copy.

  15. Author(s) review the copy edited manuscript.

  16. Book Production Editor incorporates the changes and prepares the electronic files for the typesetter.

    Interior Book Design

  17. While the Author reviews the copy edited manuscript,

  18. Graphic Designer oversees the design of the book’s interior pages. During the design process, the content, audience, and reading level of the book as well as its trim size, binding, and the complexity of its elements (eg. sidebars, wrapped text, figures, tables, photographs) are all carefully considered.

  19. Once a design is created that maximises the readability and sales potential of the book, the Typesetter creates sample ‘dummy’ pages of the design.

  20. Author has an opportunity to review these samples before the complete manuscript is sent to the typesetter. (Often the text used in the sample pages is not from the book — they are merely samples for design purposes only!)

    Book Cover

  21. Early in the production process;

  22. Publishing Team begins the collaborative task of designing the book’s cover. Covers should be both visually enticing and appropriate for a book’s content and audience.

  23. Author has the opportunity to provide input on the design and to review a cover sample and back cover copy.

  24. Once the design has been finalised, the cover files are prepared for the printer.

    *Often the approved cover design is used for marketing purposes even before the book has been published.

    Proof Review

  25. Page proofs are the unbound printouts of the book as laid out by a professional Typesetter. Depending on a book’s schedule, the Editor and Author carefully review one or more sets of page proofs before the book is printed.

  26. Essentially, the final review of page proofs is what will become the printed book. At this stage, all major changes have already been incorporated into the text, and new changes are kept to a minimum.

  27. Author double-checks the following during the Editor’s review

    running heads

    tables and figures

    references

    misspellings

    final queries

  28. Professional Proof Reader simultaneously reviews the proofs.

  29. Book Production Editor receives changes from the Author and the Proof Reader and reviews the proofs again.

  30. Typesetter incorporates all of the changes into the text and rushes final “confirming” proofs to the Book Production Editor.

  31. Book Production Editor confirms that every change has indeed been incorporated, and sends the book’s files to the printer.

    Careful and extensive proof review processes ensures that each book is of excellent quality before it is printed and bound.

    Front Matter

  32. Book Production Editor checks the front matter- copyright page, the title pages, and the table of contents, plus optional items such as acknowledgements and dedication pages, author bios and affiliations, a preface, and a foreword. An accurate copyright page is critical because it must contain all required disclaimers and credit lines for photographs and other copyrighted material. All Author names, addresses, and affiliations should be carefully checked for accuracy and spelling as well.

    Index

  33. While Author is reviewing proofs, the Book Production Editor provides another set of proofs to a professional Indexer.

  34. Indexer completes the index.

  35. Book Production Editor reviews the index.

  36. Author reviews the index and checks the index for clarity and accuracy (though not whether each entry matches up with its page number references). It is important that every necessary change is made at this stage to avoid costly changes once the index has been typeset.

    Printing and Binding

  37. Book Production Editor confirms that all changes have been incorporated into the text.

  38. Typesetter finalises the book’s electronic files.

  39. Typesetter sends the files to the Printer.

  40. Printer makes the film from which a book will be printed directly from these electronic files.

  41. Printer sends a full set of blueline proofs to the Book Production Editor. (Bluelines are proofs of the page negatives -actual representations of each printed page of the book created by holding special light-sensitive paper up to the film. Everything that will print turns blue, hence the term ‘bluelines’.)

  42. Book Production Editor reviews the bluelines to ensure that no errors have been introduced during the printing process.

  43. Book Production Editor also checks imposition at this stage, as this is the first time the publishing team will see the book’s full interior spreads.

  44. Book Production Editor returns the bluelines to the Printer (typically within 48 hours).

  45. Printer commences the actual printing and binding process.

  46. Bound copies of the book are shipped to the warehouse.

  47. The Book Production Editor sends the Author advance copies as soon as they arrive.

Production roles may include cost accountant, marketing representative, imprint manager, copy editor,  production editor, proofreader, indexer, picture researcher, paste-up artist, plant supervisor, telemarketer, bindery supervisor, letterer, layout artist, human resources director, traffic controller, editorial assistant, freelance writer, technical editor, promotion manager, design supervisor, printer.

Reference: https://www.acs.edu.au/Info/Writing/Publishing/production-process.aspx

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This article from Yahoo news https://www.yahoo.com/news/report-uk-government-begs-prince-152217711.html includes five instances where words have been attributed to an individual or organisation the journalist didn’t speak to themselves.

1.The headline reads: “Report: UK government begs Prince Harry, Meghan Markle not to invite Obamas to avoid offending Trump”

2. The article goes on to say; “Harry has made it clear he wants the Obamas at the wedding, so it’s causing a lot of nervousness,” a senior government official told The Sun, according to the report. “Trump could react very badly if the Obamas get to a Royal wedding before he has had a chance to meet the Queen.”

3. The writer claims that “The relationship between Britain and the U.S. has been icy in recent months, with British lawmakers repeatedly criticizing the president over his various comments and actions. British Prime Minister Theresa May went as far as to say the president was “wrong” after he retweeted anti-Islam videos originally posted by a leader of a far-right British fringe party.

4. And; “The London mayor has said the president shouldn’t be invited for an official state visit, and parliament debated banning him from the country before he took office.”

5. And; “Meghan Markle has also made disparaging comments about President Donald Trump in the past, calling him misogynistic in a 2016 interview. She has, however, praised his daughter Ivanka Trump on a handful of occasions.”

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To verify the authenticity of the comments discussed in the article I searched for references.

The Sun article vaguely mentions the royals’ ‘aides’ and government sources.

The article that refers to Theresa May’s comments does not show where or when her comments were allegedly made. https://www.aol.com/article/news/2017/11/29/theresa-may-says-trump-was-wrong-to-retweet-uk-far-right-group/23291843/

The London Mayor’s comments are briefly described in a Reuters article which does name it’s authors, editor, the date and event at which he is claimed to have said these words.

Megan Markle’s 2016 interview is not linked.

The article is reporting third or fourth-hand news with very little evidence to support its claims.

Cronulla Beach Clash

Reports estimate that five thousand people gathered at Cronulla Beach in support of two off-duty volunteer lifesavers who had been seriously assaulted, victims of a group attack. The following night, a serious stabbing in Woolooware led police to believe that an ongoing conflict between certain groups was underway. The police force went into high alert with roadblocks and heavily armed riot police in Cronulla and on roads leading to Cronulla including Brighton-Le-Sands. 

Along with injuries to people was also injury to Australia’s reputation for relaxed city beaches. After much coverage of the disturbances in the international media, the United Kingdom, Canada and Indonesia have issued travel warnings to tourists about going to Sydney beaches.

On the fifth of December the NSW parliament were urgently reconvened during their summer holidays to give police new powers to seize people’s vehicles and phones for up to a week, close hotel bars and declare alcohol-free zones. Changes to the Crimes Act have now been passed so that in future people convicted of rioting can be imprisoned for up to fifteen years, seven more than the previous maximum sentence of eight years.

The Right to Be Creative – In Schools, In Prison and In Life

      • [3 November 2006 – By Steven Dahlberg, Principal, International Centre for Creativity and Imagination, Willimantic, Connecticut, USA] (Edited by Megan Bliss 13 November 2017)

Inmates forfeit many rights while in prison. But their right to think creatively and express their ideas need not be surrendered. As artist M. C. Richards said, “we have to realise that a creative being lives within ourselves, whether we like it or not, and that we must get out of its way, for it will give us no peace until we do.”

Time In” is a performing arts piece by women incarcerated at York Correctional Institution in Niantic, Connecticut. Through collaborative dance, song and spoken-word the women convey the stories of their lives before conviction, the crushing limitation of existence on the inside, and the new lives and language they must learn.

Time Indemonstrates the value of believing in someone and their creative potential. After teaching creative thinking to men in a Minnesota prison in the 1980s, educator Dr. Berenice Bleedorn recalled; “I cannot forget the men who, in some cases, may be paying the high price of failure of schools and society to recognise and value a multiple of thinking and behaving talents.” To rehabilitate offenders we can support them to discover who they are, who they want to become and how to actualise that vision. Creativity can help people to consolidate their life skills for our challenging world.

Lamb originally planned to teach one, 90-minute creative writing workshop at York. He ended up working with the women for over seven years. They produced several books of their writing and partnered with other artists – including dancers from The Judy Dworin Performance Project and singers of Women of the Cross. Lamb describes the outcome, “Time In,” as “victory over voicelessness.”

“Time In” runs at Charter Oak Cultural Center in Hartford, Connecticut, November 2-4, 2006.

http://appliedimagination.blogspot.com.au/2006/11/right-to-be-creative-in-schools-in.html

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The Crazy Times

Editing Manual

1) Production process

The subeditor edits for 1 hour per 250 words of published work.

As subeditor you are responsible for:

      • Spelling, grammar, punctuation
      • Adherence to very plain English
      • Facts checking
      • Eliminating offensive terminology
      • Eliminating potential legal problems including libel and court restrictions
      • Adherence to House style, Australian measurements and phrasing
      • Rewriting as necessary for clarity and word economy
      • Cutting copy for word count requirements
      • Correcting falsities and inconsistencies.

        Content creators are not usually asked to approve the revised copy.

        We rely heavily on custom-made art to illustrate our stories and articles. Initial art ideas and requirements are briefed at the stage of first draft submission. The art director and her team finalise the illustration after the final draft.

        One of the senior editing team signs off on the copy before it is published.

        2) Style and tone

        Our target market is young people aged 14 to 30 who are intrigued, annoyed, frightened or outraged by the crazy behaviour they witness in their lives, both personally and in the media.

        The formatting conventions include bright, interesting, quirky pictures; short, snappy relateable stories and psychological information and perspectives. We always include some top tips for communication and relationships. The genre is ‘psycho-info-tainment’. The tone is friendly, humorous, light-hearted, practical and informative.

        The Crazy Times publication is a-political, whilst seeing mental illness within the context of the socio-political world.

        3) Hidden factors that may impact the editing process

        All efforts are made to be respectful of all people and to avoid defamatory, derogatory, disrespectful or hurtful commentary. Blaming and shaming must be avoided. Our style of humour is found in our perceptions of the behaviours of others and not in people’s frailty.